Please!!! Rate this song, and possibly give feedback thanks!!!?

i would have to say 3 because all your doing is rhyming and i know thats what you do in songs but you need to put lyrics in between the rhyming like when it says "angels flying, love is dying" u need to lengthen it too like "i see dark angels flying, and inside me my love is dying or something...if u need more help aim me at dino223@yahoo.com